Writers’ Corner

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Writing our way to success

This is a place to do extra writing about a topic of your choosing. You can write about anything as along as your writing is appropriate for school (no cuss words, no chat lingo, no threats, respect others). Just send a comment with your writing.

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AbileneD. wrote @ January 28th, 2008 at 8:20 am

My name is Abilene D. and i am going to be writing about puberty. Have you ever had a time when your mood started to change and you got zits and other things, i have. Just don’t freak out it just means your growing into a teenager. Well if you did just talk to someone you can trust like your parents or if you have a counselor talk to them about it and or maybe if you have a friend that already hit puberty than talk to them about if you trust them.

SamanthaM. wrote @ February 13th, 2008 at 8:21 am

Before you are all grown up you can only be a kid once in a life. Live your young life and be happy. Don’t rush your young young lives.

SamanthaM. wrote @ February 15th, 2008 at 8:11 am

Behave with your parents because you will get grounded. I already now it sucks so do as i say behave with your parents and well have fun with it!

SamanthaM. wrote @ February 21st, 2008 at 8:21 am

Ya, life might be hard, but its ok you will get over it. and it will be even harder as a adult. your life will be much easyer when you work things out!

SamanthaM. wrote @ March 11th, 2008 at 7:21 am

MOOD SWINGS
Mood swings can be tricky. First, the person is nice and happy then, they can be very angry. So, I say watch out 4 mood swings!
Good writing, make sure that you use “for” not “4″. Do you have mood swings?–Ms. Mercer

SamanthaM. wrote @ March 12th, 2008 at 7:18 am

Yes, I have mood swings and trust me it gets anouing. Thank you I don’t know how I write perfectly. I just do it. o.k. I only put 4 so it is shorter.
Thank you!

SamanthaM. wrote @ March 31st, 2008 at 7:15 am

Rules

Rules are to help you be good not to make you feel, like you are bottled up or something. If you don’t fallow the rules you are just causing trouble.
If you fallow the rules you are becoming a better person that’s the only reson their are rules.

abilene d. wrote @ May 21st, 2008 at 7:27 am

Oak Ridge Elementary is the best school EVER! I love this school, Every time i need someone to help me they are there for me. Mr.Luis said Abilene i want to see you graduate from college and i said i want you to be there. I think this school is the best i mean free monarch tickets field trips nice teachers they have everything and oh on Sunday i went to the multi cultural event it was fun and funny when Mr.Xiong got dunked i loved that part ha ha =). Ms.Mercer is so nice when i need to use the computer she lets me well not all the time because she is sometimes busy. I LOVE OAK RIDGE ELEMENTARY! BY: Abilene D. =)